Task 2 essay
IELTS Writing Task 2: Traffic in cities
Question type: Causes and solutions
The question
Traffic congestion is becoming a serious problem in many large cities.
What are the causes of this problem, and what measures could be taken to solve it?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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Answer this questionHow to approach it
- Answer both parts: one paragraph on causes, one on solutions.
- Link each solution to a cause you described, so the essay feels connected.
- Two well-explained causes are better than a long list.
Model essay
262 words (minimum 250). Written to show the features of a Band 8-level answer.
Traffic congestion has become a daily problem in many large cities, wasting time and polluting the air. This essay will examine the main causes of this problem and suggest some measures that could reduce it.
The first cause is the rapid growth in car ownership. As incomes rise, more families can afford cars, and many see them as more comfortable and convenient than public transport. The result is that roads designed decades ago must now carry far more vehicles than they were built for. A second cause is poor urban planning. In many cities, homes, offices and shops are located far apart, so people have to travel long distances every day, and if public transport is unreliable or crowded, they have little choice but to drive.
Several measures could help to solve this problem. The most effective is to invest in fast, frequent and affordable public transport. Cities such as Singapore and Seoul have shown that when trains and buses are genuinely convenient, many people are happy to leave their cars at home. Governments could also discourage unnecessary driving by introducing congestion charges in city centres, as London has done, and use the money raised to improve public transport. In the longer term, planners should design neighbourhoods where people can live, work and shop within a short distance, which would reduce the need for daily car journeys.
In conclusion, traffic congestion is mainly caused by rising car ownership and poor planning. By improving public transport, charging drivers to enter busy areas and planning cities more carefully, governments can significantly reduce the problem.
Useful language from this answer
- this essay will examine…
- outlining the structure in the introduction
- the first cause is… a second cause is…
- organising causes clearly
- the result is that…
- showing a consequence
- several measures could help to solve this problem
- moving to solutions
- in the longer term
- introducing a long-term solution
Common mistakes with this question
- Writing only about causes and forgetting solutions, or the other way round.
- Suggesting solutions that are not linked to the causes you gave.
- Giving unrealistic solutions, such as 'ban all cars', without explaining how they would work.
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