Task 2 essay
IELTS Writing Task 2: Ageing population
Question type: Problems and solutions
The question
In many countries, the proportion of older people in the population is increasing.
What problems does this cause, and what solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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Answer this questionHow to approach it
- Describe two main problems: for example, pensions and healthcare, or the workforce.
- Match each solution to a problem.
- Solutions can come from governments, employers and families.
Model essay
253 words (minimum 250). Written to show the features of a Band 8-level answer.
In many countries, people are living longer and having fewer children, so the proportion of older people in the population is rising. This trend creates several problems, but there are also practical solutions.
The most serious problem is financial. As the number of retired people grows, governments must spend more on pensions, while there are relatively fewer working people paying taxes to fund them. In Japan, for example, almost a third of the population is over sixty-five, which puts enormous pressure on public finances. A second problem is the demand for healthcare and care services. Older people are more likely to suffer from long-term illnesses, and hospitals and care homes in many countries are already struggling to find enough staff.
Several measures could help. Firstly, governments could gradually raise the retirement age, since people now remain healthy and able to work for longer than in the past. Encouraging flexible or part-time work for older employees would also allow them to keep contributing to the economy while enjoying more free time. Secondly, countries could make it easier for skilled workers from abroad, such as nurses and care workers, to fill shortages. Finally, investing in preventive healthcare, such as programmes that encourage regular exercise and healthy eating, would help people stay independent for longer and reduce the demand for expensive treatment.
In conclusion, an ageing population places pressure on pension systems and healthcare services. However, by extending working lives, welcoming skilled workers from other countries and promoting healthy lifestyles, governments can reduce these problems considerably.
Useful language from this answer
- this trend creates several problems
- moving from the situation to its effects
- the most serious problem is…
- prioritising a problem
- puts enormous pressure on
- creates great difficulty for
- several measures could help
- introducing solutions
- considerably
- to a large degree
Common mistakes with this question
- Writing only about the problems of older people themselves, rather than the problems for society.
- Offering solutions without saying how they would work.
- Using the word 'old people' repeatedly; vary it with 'older people', 'the elderly' or 'retired people'.
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